This is where I'll share the stuff that I write through the years to come. I'm hoping to pursue a career in music as I continue to exist on this planet, and I thought it'd be cool to post whatever I happen to write and see how my work evolves.
Uplifting! You do have an ear for composition, which is helpful to making quality pieces. That being said, the mixing could be improved, specifically in the middle section where the bass frequencies overpower the drums. But practice makes perfect, and I'm sure you'll refine that quality over time, since there isn't a set way to get it right.
I specifically enjoyed the outro. While the FL Keys piano sample is not of the highest quality, I could imagine something of a piano solo, maybe accompanied by strings or the like. Keep making melodies!
I love you, but your attitude is like that of a shrew. Your options? Take a pill or be my kill. Might I suggest that you wear a vest. Perish in class or be banished to the land of bluegrass, where dreams don't exist as you'll be eternally pissed.