The gift for lets roll sub 2.30

This just started 2 weeks ago , when i play MBP , my father come to me. I just ask him to play. My father start playing from lets roll . Just waiting and after an hour , He beat the platinum time. Now just a turn for me. I play this level , while i play , my father ask me to get sub 2:30 . I want a Book for the gift , my father accept this. Let me watch teh lets roll in wr rampage and after 2 hours , i got 2.29 !!! at the first time , my father don't believe me , but my father got believe and he say he will buy it tommorow! Yayayayayay!!! And after i got the gift , i warned 10% in this forum! so damn!
The story is over!
~NaCl586

Wait...you got a gift for getting MB times? Lucky Either way, nice time, beats mine.

<unrelated> You're making progress on the punctuation thing, but remember about commas, only one space afterwards.

Congratz. My parents wouldnt give me present even if i would beat all UTs on MBP without cheating.

In the 2 hours i spent to get 2.29,i screamed to my father like this : 2.32 ! wooohooo,then 2.31!,so close!,then again 2.30 ! JUST ONE MILISECOND LEFT !,then 2.29! yayayayay!

@nobody,see this text!
@RDs,you never ask your parents like me